***Brick Lane

I walked by the lanes, empty handed in the dark

All those echoes of cynical laughter in misery

You played a sad rhythm jumping over the puddles

All those red bricks stared at us in pain

I mellowed at the young blood in the cold streets

All those coke which they snorted in glee

You vanished like a vampire, but lingered in the air

All those heart prints you imprinted in blood

I wept for how touched our lives had become

All those strange emotions I felt in solitude

You, me the two of us is an ancient myth

All of Brick lane mused aloud in unison

I waited for those distant footsteps

All those dreams of rain and love

You strolled calmly serene and peaceful

All that warmth you showered on me in love

I turned back and gazed into vast emptiness

All of the brick lane stood alone in you…

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Santiago says:

Jul 20, 2011 at @ 15:08

your works have good language… they are poetic and beautiful… convey something… but i feel they miss something … I don't know what is that “something”… oru pakshe enik manassilavathathu kondavam… Abdul Khader nte “akhayum akhyathavum” pole… !!!

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Santiago says:

Jul 20, 2011 at @ 15:08

your works have good language… they are poetic and beautiful… convey something… but i feel they miss something … I don't know what is that “something”… oru pakshe enik manassilavathathu kondavam… Abdul Khader nte “akhayum akhyathavum” pole… !!!

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A dot says:

Jul 22, 2011 at @ 15:04

Thank you!

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A dot says:

Jul 22, 2011 at @ 15:04

Thank you!

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